Intro: Disney Land
Supporting paragraph 1: It's in the states
example: Orlando,Florida
reason: I would personally love to go to the states so If I visit Disney Land then I get to see all the wonderful places.
personal story: There are lots of amusement parks in the world and I have been in a few and I would love to also visit this particular amusement park some day.
Supporting paragraph 2: Fun activities
example: games, roller-coasters
reason: I love amusement parks
personal story: Last year I was in this big amusement park where they give you a map in the entrance and the rides were all rated by how dangerous they were(1-5) and also how much adrenaline the ride gives you( Also from 1-5).
The world we live in is a big and wonderful place one might say. Granted it can only be wonderful to us if we are aware of how beautiful it is, that is to say we should all travel as much as we can. May I quote:
"The world is like a book and those who don't travel only read one page".
The famous place that I would like to visit someday of my choice is Disney Land. It is kind of odd I know. But I have quite good reasons supporting my idea.
The first point I would like to make is that Disney Land it's located in the States, therefore if I get lucky and visit it someday that means that I also get to see the wonderful cities where it is located for example: Orlando and Florida. Undoubtedly there are lots of amusement parks in the world and I myself have been in a few, besides I am quite aware that Disney Land is also located in other continents, but I would most personally like going to the ones that are placed in the USA.
My second point is that Disney Land is actually known for it's famous fun activities, games and roller-coasters. That is to say I love amusement parks. I have always loved them, since I was a little girl I quite remember begging my parents to go to amusement parks whenever we were in vacation in a new place. Even now I still beg them! I remember the last time I was in an amusement park. It was last year in Koln, Germany. The amusement park was named Fantasy Land as I recall. It was the biggest amusement park in the area that is for sure. At the entrance the people that worked there gave us maps of the park and the rides were actually rated by how dangerous they are(1-5) and how much adrenaline they give you(Also 1-5).
I remember having a very joyful time with my family and I hope to have another similar experience very soon but this time I really hope it's in Disney Land.
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